Qi En's Character

[Carillus]

Your character needs room for personality expansion. Currently, it looks too 1D to me.

[Phagetthree]

A little overpowered?

[Qi En]

SPOILER: Click to show

proby has activated the program, Grey-8, which would be able to erase his data tracks

Note: Words marked in [] brackets are non-existent in this Universe.

Image attached is Nanase from a VN, Natuyume Nagisa, who happens to look like Pamela. (note that Pamela has green eyes, not red eyes)


Name: Pamela Paladinne

Age: 18

Gender: F

Race: Human

Appearance:
She has long, black hair (which many find pretty the first time they meet her) and green eyes, as well as an ahoge. She is well known for having a rather large chest size, and is often made fun of by Ariela (who seems to always pick clothes with a cleavage for her). Being considerably tall and beautiful, many find her to be an 'onee-sama' figure. She keeps all sorts of tiny animals with her, most notably a blue octopus, a purple puppy, and a white furball.

Personality:
Despite her appearance, Pamela is not as wonderful as the first impression she gives people. This is mostly due to the fact she's a terrible dojikko, and often makes all sorts of careless mistakes outside of cooking. She also lacks confidence at times, especially if she has to face new challenges. Despite this, she always tries her best to keep herself from being careless, and to do her best. She is extremely hardworking and often study with Jonas. Pamela is both a lolicon and shotacon, according to Crystal, but she always refuses to admit it. Nevertheless, the tiny animals she takes care of find her to be a mothery figure [outside of the white furball], and a very good caregiver [outside of the white furball again].

Biography:
Pamela is an ordinary girl who lives in an alternate universe, whereby gravity has a different effect on the surroundings and can be manipulated by people. She is sent to take care of a sealed dangerous being, who would otherwise threaten the safety of this universe.

It turns out that the dangerous being is none other than Proby, who was planning to [break the 4th wall]. Being the only person who can [wield the safekeeper of the 4th wall, Grey-8 to] control him, she will put Proby under dentention as a Kedama, and ensure life is as normal as it can be.

She is aided by an intelligent puppy, Quimby, with limited psychic powers to sense things and convey via telepathy, and Octo, a land octopus [that guards the fabric of reality via the program, Grey-8, to protect it from invasion by Proby.]

She will be joining the Astronomy Club and Library Club.


Skills (if any):

Cooking master: Pamela is very good at cooking, and she never makes careless mistakes in it.

Flight: Pamela can alter gravity for flight. Its her only other superpower.

Attachments:

[Kim Kwan-Jang]

maybe it's just me under OEG indoctrination, but what the heck is an otaku club.

[kaisan]

Oh, you fixed it.

Still, it'd be better if you just indicate the character's interests or something. We don't know what clubs are available in the academy.